~ MsLanna's Mando Poetry ~

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~ MsLanna's Mando Poetry ~

Unread postby MsLanna » 30 Jan 2011 02:54

I'll just see how much interest there is for things like this.
And for starters, I won't post translations. I wonder how it works if yoo have to use the Manod-only version. :?:


vercopa

bes'laar cuun runi laraari
mesh'la kaab tome
a ni
laraari lise dar

sal cuun kar'ta hetti
dral tracyn tome
a ni
haa'tayli lise dar

kyrbej o'r kovid
kyr'am bal rud
bal ni
akaani lise dar

ni ne sirbu 'mhi' tug'yc
n'sirbu 'su'cuy', cyar'ika
tion meh
- tion meh -
Vercopa 'meh' ven cuyi

vencuyot bes'laar
a ni
susulu lise dar
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Ve'vut sur'haaise darasuum!
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Re: ~ MsLanna's Mando Poetry ~

Unread postby Lyat'aag » 30 Jan 2011 05:07

Very pretty. Couple head scratchers here and there, but very nice.
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Re: ~ MsLanna's Mando Poetry ~

Unread postby MsLanna » 17 Feb 2011 23:06

If you tell me where you scratch your head, we could try to find a way to make things more clear?
Anyway, found an old bit in my notes today. :D

Ibac ehn miite ni ru'sirbu naysol, nu'luubid
Tion gar kar'tayili, nu'pir'ekulor cuy pakod'shya
ti gar uram yaihi'l be'tihaar?
Bic cuy, ni ru'pirimmu.
Mirdi par gar.

XD
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Re: ~ MsLanna's Mando Poetry ~

Unread postby MsLanna » 24 Mar 2014 00:54

In case you'd rather read the stuff here than on fanfiction.net. (Where I can easily be found under this name...)
This is the one I got signed by Karen Traviss. My pride and joy. XD

An solus

Ner vode an cuy solus,
cuy ori'shya soletar
- An solus -
Souls troan, jorad solus
Solus kandosii kar'ta
- An solus -

ner vode cuy kotyc,
mesh'la kyramla,
- sa solus -
buurenaare be ciryc
buurenaar nadala
- sa solus -

Ner vode moti sa solus
Draar Trattok'o
-nu solus -
Ori'shya kando solus
yaimpa enteyo
-val solus -

ni cuy ti ner vode
ashi troan, jorad ashi
- su solus -
kandosii kar'tase
ti val dar aruetii
- an solus -
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Re: ~ MsLanna's Mando Poetry ~

Unread postby Vlet Hansen » 24 Mar 2014 02:01

Dha!
Shi adate kotep luubid...
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Re: ~ MsLanna's Mando Poetry ~

Unread postby MsLanna » 25 Mar 2014 18:51

Wo?

No wait... XD
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Re: ~ MsLanna's Mando Poetry ~

Unread postby MsLanna » 30 Mar 2014 21:34

And a new one for a change....


Ramaanla Kadala

Ni kadala gayiyla
Jorcu gar echoy'la
Palom o'r kar'ta
Troane cuy be gar

Ner aaray cuy ner solus
Gar gai ven'cuy sol'yc
O'r ner tome'tayl aikyc
anay geca'tra tugyc


Bal ni kar'tayli
Gar ratiin ven'cuy
Ner vode an
Ner aay'han
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Re: ~ MsLanna's Mando Poetry ~

Unread postby MsLanna » 06 Apr 2014 19:49

Ciryc, maan sur’haaise be ve’vut
shekemi anay shaad
kyramla sa kad
su cuy ner shi dral morut

akaani tracyn bal carud
solus gaancy
ori’suumiyc
ne’tra beskaryc kyramud

Su kaysh cuy ner shi choruk
o’r sho’cye be vhekad
o’r vurel shaadla haat
ner shi ruusanyc buruk



Yes. I am that sappy. And I will NOT apologise for it*. :yay:




*Except to tha man in person. With a beskad at my throat. Or something close to that...
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